I have just
started a new story. Let me know what you guys think about it, okay?
The story
goes like this:
Once upon a time,
there was a dog.
The dog was
so weak that it suddenly died.
That’s the
end of the story.
The end.
Could you
guys provide me with feedback, please?
·
What did you like about my
writing?
·
Who was your favorite character
and why?
·
Was there a particular phrase or
paragraph that stood out to you?
·
Did my writing remind you of
another author? Who?
·
How could I improve my writing?
You may be
thinking that this is the most stupid thing you have ever read, right?
Too short,
too boring, some might think.
Well, this
short post about a short story may be a provocative one. One of the most
difficult things in “writing correction” – some people would simply called it feedback
– is how to say that a piece of writing it not good.
Therefore, I would
like to ask you guys: How do you correct your students when their composition,
essays and the like are not that good?
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Thank you very much.
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